The timing on this piece is actually pretty nice. The thing i notice is that all the poses look like they are sliding into place. It feels very even. I don't think you have any steps... the feet just slide into place. Also fix the part where he gets up. After that, it should be very nice.
Well I'm haveing the same issue with yours as I did with Jins and Evans.. darn thing dosen't play right. I cannot even watch it this time because it says it's unavailable. I'll take a look at it later Josh, I think my internet is just being a jerk.
Looks better Josh. That is nice piece. But some parts are sliding on the land and when he stands up it still seems like fast. Just give him little bit more time when he gets up! :)
the piece looks pretty good. i think certain poses and keys look great. the movement he has when he says he wants to cry himself to sleep, and when he sounds like he's crying are particularly good. there are some places where i think an extra keyframe would have helped out, such as the ending when he jumps up.
It appears if some of the keys are on Stepped Tangents or that there is a need for more inbetweens (but, this is a very long audio piece--maybe just pick a section and really refine it). I really like the follow through on the fall-to-the-knees section. I would like to see this follow-through in the rest of the piece (but maybe refine just one section--to keep your sanity!)
The timing and flow works well on yours. I like how all the motion moves from one gesture to the next smoothly. It might be good to see a little over shoot on a few poses, though I understand it might be tough to do that with how little time you have to move from pose to pose. The movement just seems too robotic now and again.
looks like some of the keys are stepped and some linear? I found this happening to me sometimes. select all the keys and convert them to linear to be sure. needs another keyframe on jump up
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The timing on this piece is actually pretty nice. The thing i notice is that all the poses look like they are sliding into place. It feels very even. I don't think you have any steps... the feet just slide into place. Also fix the part where he gets up. After that, it should be very nice.
the piece is pretty nice I just think that the ebd part where he jumps up could use another inbetween
Well I'm haveing the same issue with yours as I did with Jins and Evans.. darn thing dosen't play right. I cannot even watch it this time because it says it's unavailable. I'll take a look at it later Josh, I think my internet is just being a jerk.
Looks better Josh. That is nice piece. But some parts are sliding on the land and when he stands up it still seems like fast. Just give him little bit more time when he gets up! :)
the piece looks pretty good. i think certain poses and keys look great. the movement he has when he says he wants to cry himself to sleep, and when he sounds like he's crying are particularly good. there are some places where i think an extra keyframe would have helped out, such as the ending when he jumps up.
It appears if some of the keys are on Stepped Tangents or that there is a need for more inbetweens (but, this is a very long audio piece--maybe just pick a section and really refine it). I really like the follow through on the fall-to-the-knees section. I would like to see this follow-through in the rest of the piece (but maybe refine just one section--to keep your sanity!)
The timing and flow works well on yours. I like how all the motion moves from one gesture to the next smoothly. It might be good to see a little over shoot on a few poses, though I understand it might be tough to do that with how little time you have to move from pose to pose. The movement just seems too robotic now and again.
looks like some of the keys are stepped and some linear? I found this happening to me sometimes. select all the keys and convert them to linear to be sure. needs another keyframe on jump up
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